You shoot up,
And each time you stab me in the back.
You take a drink
Knocking down what I've built up.
You find a way to be
Everything that I hate.
And so I'll let you go,
and let your mind sedate
With all your fortifying pills,
That will take away
Every one of your wills.
Take away the pain and
Every ounce of human brain power,
Just sit there in your drugged up world.
Hour after hour,
Alone.
Slip away into a dark world
Where you will forever remain
Unknown.
A contest entry
- Anything Related To Illegal Drugs &/or Alcohol Abuse and Recovery by Viyanna Rosemarie.
700 points, ended April 10, 2009, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Drugs and Eating Disorders by Dlvvanzor.
410 points, ended April 25, 2009, 71 entries
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Comments
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I like it, and I especially liked the first two lines. Great write.
Thanks for entering!
-Dlvvanzor -
i would like to thank you for this entry into my contest and to wish you the best of luck in the judging process. viyanna rosemarie
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An abundance of imagery within this well written composition--Very thought provoking.
Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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