Trying to kill the pain,
and burining up inside.
Dying slowly....
Am i too lost?
Return to me salvation
I long to have your touch
don't slip from my fingers
Return to me salvation
return to me
Salvation
Im so close to the other side
will you be waiting?
or have i slipped through your mind?
will you remember me?
Even when I'm gone?
Return to me salvation
I long to have your touch
don't slip from my fingers
Return to me salvation
return to me
Salvation
My soul cries for deliverence
Will you bring it to me?
Will I be denied the things I love?
Return to me salvation
I long to have your touch
don't slip from my fingers
Return to me salvation
return to me
Salvation
Author notes
Prompt was Evanescence-Tourniquet. Best of luck judging.
A contest entry
- Music that inspires by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
400 points, ended April 11, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Very good take on the prompt. I think that the lines you took from the song here really came out good with your piece.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
your title....
Tourniquet
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