I caught a raindrop this morning,
it reminded me of us.
Reflections of the rainbow,
shimmered.
We promised each other,
"yes".
hope resides despite all conflicts
Author notes
Prompt :
"The rain fell and whispered your name to my heart" ~ By Angelflower
In a list
A contest entry
- A Morning Contest. by Angelflower.
400 points, ended May 2, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice write. It's kind of like a haiku, not in its form but in it simplicity.
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This has such a lovely gentle flow to it. Well done.
Mariana
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Aww..so beautiful...arousing lovely warm feelings..
All the best!
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oh now I like this one... very short.. few words true but it really said a whole lot. I mean really a raindrop and rainbows what better imagery can one think of to write with. Good creative write here. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Another beauty.
Blessed Be,
***Rae***
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aw a beautiful write I like this good luck in the contestmaralisa
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I liked this poem.
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Wow this is wonderful as usual. This is so amazing I loved it! I loved it! Very nicely written and it was a pleasure to read.
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