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The Raven - Limerick

 

 

 

 

 

There comes from the valley a raven,
whose acts of desire are quite craven,
she'll give me some flacking,
when ardour I'm lacking
that raven whose touch I am cravin'.

 

 

 

 

 

JF 03 April 2009

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  • MorbidGarden
    April 8

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    wonderful...love poems about the wonderful raven...poe did that bird a favor, but so did you...even though your raven has not wings but hair so black...great job!

  • Purrsanthema
    April 6
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    Does she say "NEVERMORE?" It appears she says "EVERMORE!!!"


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 6
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    BOOM BOOM!


  • maralisa silver member
    April 4
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    aw a wonderful write I like your rhyme throughout thank you for sharingmaralisa

  • chiefmac
    April 4

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    This is short and well crafted. Rhyme and flow move smoothly. The reader has fun with the up and down rollercoaster alliteration.

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