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Consummation Of The Marshmallow

She makes my heart melt
Just like a white marshmallow
Popped in hot cocoa

Her pleased eyes widen
When my sweet marshmallow melts
In her creamy cup

To make me melt more
Her full lips blow me deeper
Down where it’s steamy

She wants me consumed
And she won’t be satisfied
Until I’m swallowed

My white foam that forms
All around her sipping lips
Delights her dearly



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  • this is oh so nice!


  • sunoir
    June 2

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    hot chocolate and marshmallows num


  • Edie gold member
    June 2

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    this is sexy and so humorous. For indeed sex should be fun and playful too!

    Best of luck in the contest.

  • OOH LA LA

    Now, I must boil some hot...cocoa
    Best wishes
    stay
    liquid


  • Knight70
    June 2

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    I'm roasting my marshmallows over an open fire....

    Ah, she is a delight. Very creative! In defense of this not being labeled as an adult poem, it was submitted for a "naughty" contest.

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