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I feel like I’ve sneezed
  ten times in a row,

but

your eyes could make it eleven.








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  • ItaloEtkin
    April 7
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    this is very smart.. good write!

  • PlaidLad
    April 5

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    Okay. I just love this.

    I first found you through the Kiwi poem on shameless, and was going to say something about you having a real gift for balanced phrasing, but decided to read the rest of your stuff, and this one caught my eye.

    You're a charmer.


    • silverscent gold member
      April 6
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      Thanks for that lovely compliment I'm glad you like what you read.


  • sleep artist
    April 4
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  • CaliOkie silver member
    April 4
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    Excellent. So well done with so few words. Classic.

    Garrison


  • sweet arrival gold member
    April 4

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    that is one of the most clever writings that ive read... awesome. made me tingle just thinking about his eyes... of course, i have specific ones in mind. great! i love this one...

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