unknowingly
a child of innocence
stands
in fields of death
Author notes
picture is your prompt
by Anne Marshall
10 words
In a list
A contest entry
- picture this... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 4, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ohhh, so eerie and so well done, congratulations on the goldie, you are deserving.
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Oh my gosh! A totally different interpretation to the one I had on first look at the picture. But after reading your poem, I went back, and suddenly I could see the artillery smoke and blood... your words are just so evocative! Lita
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whoa ~ this is gripping... x
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Wow Sue, so much expression in only 10 words! Very well done.
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Sue
you know as I read this it reminds me of all wars and those fields of death that comsume the innocent. And then I realize it has always been & probably all ways will be. Only in a poets heart can we bring it to an end.
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is that really only 10 words?
Reads like a short story!
Great stuff
Jeff
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Great work. Hard to believe so much can be said in just 10 words. Bravo!
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