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Eyes of a Heart

Hot tears
Boiling anger
Dispirited soul
Can't think

Trust dissolved
Faith crushed
Illusions flee
Reality strikes

Revealed torment
Mangled evidence
Anguish's fingerprint
Pain's boot print

Shattered eyes
So beautiful
Damaged soul
Disfigured heart

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 4

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    You have a wonderfully awsome poem you wrote. It is wonderfully written. Wonderful flow and your detail is awsome to.