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Sleep

You hexed my fickle soul
and it was yours

I waited on your whims
not knowing the cure

For the cure was within,
within your mind

But I was lost,
lost in your bind

You led me out
from a deep maze

You kept me alive
my mind ablaze

It flew and flew,
till nothing more

I'd done everything,
no more need to explore

I was free and happy,
and actually living

New ecstatic days,
no more unforgiving

Then I woke up

You hexed my fickle soul,
with a fallacy.

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  • Aquarius
    April 9

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    Ahh! Whitney!!
    I LOVEE LOVE LOVE the rhyming in this! ^_^ It's adorable! It made me giggle, its great It is so fun to say too!

    Maze... ablaze! Mind... bind! awe.