Oh such pathetic dreams I hold.
It's sad really to even consider them possible.
Oh but one, one dream stands out,
Not only in it's outlandish nature,
But even thinking it makes me twisted and sick.
But I just can't help it.
The desire I have to fulfill this impossible fantasy,
Is more so than a man who has been taken away from his drug,
And pits him mad digging his flesh in hopes of one more high.
This one urge has driven me to the limits of insanity,
I have killed my mind in order to escape it's limits.
Limits that would have kept me from my current state.
It's a sicking thing to even think of,
Oh, if only those could see inside,
See what dismal and hopeless dream this self proclaimed "Child of the Mother God" has, and would do anything for.
So what is it you may ask,
What is this secret dream that although few know,
Laughed it off thinking I was making a clever fucking joke,
What is this thought, that corrupts me?
What is this goal that makes me so odd?
What is this morbid thought that I can never see?
What is this sickness that has me flawed?
What is this heresy stricken reverie?
Well my friends.... I simply wish to be God.
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deep rich emotionfilled write, thank you for entering
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This was a wonderful write
packed with many emotions
and questions to ponder.
Great take on the picture
prompt!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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haha thanks ^^
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I honestly think you have a lot of potential to really bring out a deeper more emotional poem. I think that you deserve to fulfill that potential so I'm moving you on to th enext round. You've made a 50 on this poem. You've got a total of 90 points. You've made the finalist list. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. kah
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This is so amazing.
& really powerful with a lot of emotion.
Great job!
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Sweet...loved the display of emotion while not overdoing the emotion, if that made since. it was incredible
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Wow, this held so much
depth and power.
Such a wonderful
inner poetic voice
unearthed here.
Keep up the good work~
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