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Dreamer

I am the dream spinner,
the memory weaver,
the one in charge of it all.

I am in your mind,
your heart, your soul
my work is undefined.

I rule the dawn,
with its bright, blessed light
I rule the night and its wares.

I'm within a dream
A long forgotten scheme
A love defined with care.

You shall see me like this
But in a whisper I'm gone
For I am the one
who is all alone.

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  • forbidden-colour
    April 4, 2009

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    "I rule the dawn"

    I liked this, it fits into that category in my mind of that type of poem that questions, wonders the brilliance of the world.
    I enjoyed reading this.

    Thank you for sharing this with me
    Kind regards
    Sophie


  • Licinius6790Archias silver member
    April 4, 2009

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    Superb

    A very fine write, indeed. You expressed your self quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.