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Zeal

spiraled
down my spine
I want to jump for joy
you might have missed something
deliriously excited
spinning around and around
with you
secluded castle in
pockets of sensory
guided instruction
alleviation with sparks
is adrenaline to breathe

into reigns that washed coil
loud noises and electrostatics
rug and magnetic line
to lit fuses of flint

my book is in your library
(to be heard)
anything that was bore
still untold
I feel another's pulse
to rinse tarnished seem
come with candle light
into my world

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prompt: happy fits of rage

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 18

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    Interesting; I love the abstract feel of this write as my attention never wavered for I wanted to know where this was leading - Excellent

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