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Scream

Driving home after a long day's night
You start bringing up every little problem
That presented itself

I can't even hear you
So accustomed to this fight I've grown
I don't understand
Why you feel the need to scream about everything

I may have no choice soon but to leave
You can't even see what's going on around you!

Everyone, see
What you could end up being
Petty five year-old arguments
Have a way of mushrooming
And consuming the rest of the world with them

Author notes

Inspired by the video for Chris Cornell's song Scream

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pBjBFEByEDE

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    May 19

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    This is such a great write, I really enjoyed reading htrough this. you described it so well. Welld one and all the best for the contest.


  • Progandother
    May 2

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    ...aaah...Chris Cornell...reminds me of how much I miss Soundgarden...did I ever miss Soundgarden? Not sure...

    ...I can see how this is related to the song near to perfection...the balanced phrasing based around the context that people are consistently arguing about nothing important or related to the important things in life...I particularly like the "mushrooming" metaphor...

    ...very good write...detailed very well to the song...good luck...

    Oliver


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    April 6
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    Good Write, But i usually pick the videos for the entries,


  • caos-cordura
    April 4
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    Good write and this tells a lot about your life.