He listens to my thoughts
my every need and desire
even without saying a word
my look is all that's required
He knows when I need a hug
or his shoulder to shed my tears
he knows my greatest secrets
and my every fear.
I never have to tell him
it's all in my look
he knows what I need
he reads me like a book.
He says what I am thinking
before I even speak
he runs me bubble baths
when I am tired and weak.
No man is perfect
but this one is mine
I don't think he exists
but he is my design.
Author notes
My husband is like this in a few aspects...he can tell what I am feeling without my saying a word but the rest is....well....the perfect man in my minds eye....he also has to LOVE to read poetry! LOL
In a list
A contest entry
- Ladies Only (Romantic male) by Riftkin.
700 points, ended April 9, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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beautiful
and happy to see you both doing well...love you bunches baby girl ~Momma~ congrats!
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wonderfully done
beautiful and sweet i think all women want a man like that at some point. luvs a peace
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CONGRADULATIONS ON THE bronze
lucky lady
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Congats on your bronze sis! I told you that you wrote beautifully~!
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Now if only all the guys knew what we
wanted without ever saying a word..
Best of luck to you in my contest.
Riftkin
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I loved it!!! Very well written, it was a pleasure! Gives me goals to work on for when I meet the right young lady :-P. I give you props
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Very nicely done. Great ryme and flow but most of all you understand that it takes time to mold a perfect man and that maybe you already have the clay. I liked this very much!
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lovely
NO one is perfect but they can be perfect for you! I am glad you found that perfect one. So many in this world are searching for love and never find it. God bless you. Good luck in the contest, Mark
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this is very cute and beautiful the funny thing is my boyfriend does all this so maybe he is perfect
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"bubble baths" and "my design", thats awesome! That's the kinda man I'm talkin' about! Excellent job describing the love we all hope to recieve from our man. Good luck in the conest sis!
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