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Sng for Arjel

My lover's eyes are sharpened stars
The color of a moonless night
His words, the nurture to my heart
His smiles the comfort of the mind

His long embrace, my sweet surrender
A comfort deep, an answered need
Strong's our bind for love empowers
All our thoughts and all our deeds

My lover's lips are bloom of cherries
His heart the swoon of angels soaring
This man, God knows, how much I cherish
A granted wish of soul's lamenting

But now -

My lover's joy is my heart's sigh
His love, my song of aches and tears
My lover, once whom I call mine
My lover's now another's dear

Author notes

i've written this poem last October 2006... The best guy I've ever loved is a Capricorn like me. His birthday's on Jan. 19, while mine's Jan. 6.

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 4, 2009

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    This is a wonderful write all about love. This is so beautiful I loved it! I loved it! Wonderfully written and it was a pleasure to read.