I love these rides
they scare me so dear
but, i cant go away
as i sit in my seat
my heart pumps
faster and faster what is to come?
the adrenalin runs through my veins
and my mind want to run
my gut is ripped away
and soon does return
not for long as up again
off and ready to move on
i get back on this ride
the feeling seems to merge yet again
the feeling of fright feels great
A contest entry
- braveheart or scary cat? by honey bear.
700 points, ended April 7, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful to get the adrenalin going. Good write here.
Be well,
Trent
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ooh you are a braveheart
me? i am a scary cat 
great work, thank you for entering and good luck in the conteast with this fun exitment filled write 
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omgosh! this sounds so thrilling. i love the feeling and the tone of this poem. it was well penned
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