New dawn has broken,
Rays of hope hit the ground,
Her heart ready for fate,
As she preapres for flight
Fly on your wings, little Robyn,
Upon the high winds of destiny,
Reach beyond the sun, the moon and stars,
Fly on your wings, litte Robyn
With wind beneath her wings,
The world now below her,
A melody of love,
Whispers her name so high
Fly on your wings, little Robyn,
Upon the high winds of destiny,
Reach beyond the sun, the moon and stars,
Fly on your wings, litte Robyn
Fly, sweet little Robyn,
Spread your majestic wings,
True love awaits you now,
Fly, sweet little Robyn
Fly on your wings, little Robyn,
Upon the high winds of destiny,
Reach beyond the sun, the moon and stars,
Fly on your wings, litte Robyn
Author notes
A song I've written for my friend Robyn 
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First off, nice to see something new from you, I have just broken through a bit of a block myself.
This a reminder of an old Jimi Hendrix tune. Very good flow. While I am not a believer in destiny the sentiment here is well done. To reach beyond that which is known to find the future.
Peace
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Thanks
I decided I needed to do something more calmer & peaceful rather than constant dark, hatred lol
Also, it's good to hear from you again
& Jimi Hendrix was an immense artist
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wow, an amazing piece nico, very wonderful, as someone who is in love with a mate i cant have..just wow, u are a realy great poet
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Yer the better poet
I just know how to make the words dance
It takes a real poet to let the poem touch the reader's soul
But thank you fer the kind comment
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Wow this is wonderful I loved it! I loved it! this was wonderfully written. wonderful flow of words and I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Thank you, yer words are too kind ^_^
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Pretty lyrics. I'm sure the melody as beautiful as words.
Your friend should be proud!
Thanks for sharing.
Karina
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Thank you
I have the piano intro written up, so hopefully by summer I should have this recorded & put onto disc for her
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