heart skips over tears
as his vacant chair now rocks
a quiet theatre
Author notes
This is my first attempt at a Haiku since I have never really been a fan of the form, despite the brevity it remains quite the challenge to write one well.
In a list
A contest entry
- 48 Hour Haiku by azure85.
900 points, ended April 5, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest appraisal please, I don't need my ego stroked
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heart skips over tears
as his vacant chair now rocks
a quiet theatre
A very sad haiku, as remembrances of him are seen within your haiku. You did very well with this, you should try more haiku.
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i think its a good haiku then again im biased beacsue your my uncle lol
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lol ty dear niece.
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First attempt! omg this is amazing, cuz!
You seem to have a knack for these
So happy you are back home
Lynda
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thanks as always for your undying support sweet cuz
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