A magpie surveys
a spring wedding and the rings
a thief in waiting.
A contest entry
- 48 Hour Haiku by azure85.
900 points, ended April 5, 22 entries
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This is both sinister and cute! They do....like shiny things though don't they.And a spot on formed Haiku.
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A magpie surveys
a spring wedding and the rings
a thief in waiting.
This is a good haiku, and I like your AHA moment alot. Ah, those sneaky magpies. Thank you so much.
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This little Haiku is humorous! I can just see that thieving bird smugly plotting his dirty deed. Too cute.
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I love this!
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Splendid
I love this! I can see it so well...from the magpie's point of view. Beautiful job!
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