A crack appeared
in the concrete by your
right foot
and I saw you
poke your toes in,
lift up the loose rock
and let the hole get bigger.
How can I bare to be less
than perfect?
Author notes
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bare:naked
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Nice write here, and usage of the imagery. Nice little wordplay in the last stanza using "bare" instead of "bear."
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incredible write. i love short poems that use few words in such a way that i gasp when finished reading.
*gasp*
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WOW! not only does the picture speak a thousand words to me ... but this piece you created speaks another thousand ... why is this not in a contest?!?!?! it should be ...
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simply because I don't know what contest would take it...which contest it fits the criteria of...thanks for the lovely comment
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