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I knocked you out in the third round.

 

 

i.

Afternoon sun finds its way

through blinds, dancing with

dust particles, resembling tiny

bright fireflies that contrast

soft shadows of our bedroom.

 

ii.

Light stripes our naked bodies,

wrinkled sheets are kicked

to the foot in a heap, much

too warm for our passion.

 

iii.

Your near silence, save a

few fulfilled sighs of pleasure

makes me happy, satisfying you

is my drug; an addiction

I never want to give-up.

 

iv.

Radiance catches your form

like a fine alabaster sculpture

on display and my hands

simply cannot resist.

 

v.

You smile like the Cheshire cat  

only with your eyes closed

looking so peaceful

as I whisper in your ear,

“I want you again.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Love shines through this piece in a very strong and sensual way. I like your imagery here as it is very powerful to the senses. I enjoyed reading this.

    Yours in Darkness
    Wayne Leon


  • Ann45 gold member
    July 5
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    nice

    very nice and the picture is very clear well done

  • My My,... this is scrumptious

    so very very...sutley sultry,you had me all the way down to the very last word.well done, and so classy
    I bow my head and say Bravo!!!

    Blessings

    Rend

  • This is very well written.
    My favorite stanza was the last one.
    Keep up the great job

  • beautiful; I love the way this is written.
    and the title is sublime. very catchy.


  • Daizee silver member
    April 4

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    To have that kind of passion continue through out your life is the key. Nice picture you've painted

    Love,
    Stacy

  • Most definitely amazing and beautiful. These weren't the words I expected to wake up to but I can think of no better way to start the day

    One thousand poems is quite a milestone...congratulations.

    Love Margaret


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 3
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    congrats on the thousandth poem


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 3
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    eek
    where is my water


  • BlancetNoir gold member
    April 3

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    congratulations on the big milestone. fabulous write...
    do you have a brother somewhere?


  • Myjoy gold member
    April 3

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    Ooooo my that was sexy.
    Lucky woman.....to have such a caring man to make her pleasure your drug. Phewww I need a cold shower that one got my mind a wandering.
    Well then I must say good visuals.......and what a thousandth poem it was!

  • ah that is the trouble with an addiction, you have your fix and then two seconds later you desire more lol - a good poem.

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