she wakes up whishing it was just a dream,
but as the day goes on she relises it's her living nightmare.
in her head beggining to scream,
while she's thinking life's not fair.
she may be smiling,
hiding her fears.
but inside she's dying,
afraid of her own tears.
as the day fades to night,
wishing the war is over.
loseing this fight,
as she grows colder.
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AMAZING
wow
this is a strong and beautful pem
i can definetly realte.
good job! -
It's a really strong piece. I especially loved the middle stanza.
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sad but wonderfully written darling
you will win the fight just keep getting up -
short yet mucho strong write doll,
i hope the best for you
&& im sure many like myself can relate
that just makes the poem much more better then it is
keep up the work,xxx
vanna -
Nice job I like the middle paragraph the best nice job
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Hey
Very emotional, and very great. keep up the good work.
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