This feeling deep within
Beneth the hope and devotion.
Hidden under skin,
Is a pool of conflicting emotion.
A love like hell fire,
Burning, unable to be extinguished.
Yet fear and terror so diar,
Can this uncertainty be reliquished?
I longed to hold you in arms so empty,
Feel your love, see my life in your eyes.
But still I remember the pain you gave me,
When you turned around, said your goodbyes.
Again you are here, everything makes sense,
Except this overwhelming ache.
Black thoughts inside, you'll leave again,
Could you run, will you deny fate?
You hold me, say i'm your only desire,
All you every wanted, needed, dreamed.
Gazing into your soul through eyes of saphire,
I know this love has become more then it seemed.
Author notes
this poem is about my feeling about my boyfriend. he came home FINALLY after eight months of breaking my heart. I left everything for this man time and time again, and i thought that we would never reunite again. but when i told him i was done with him he decided to come home and regain the love we once shared. now everything is better then ever i must admit, but i still have this trust issue because of what happened. this undying thought that he will leave, even though i know he loves me, and that's what this poem is about.
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Great stuff!!!
Deep, dark & beautiful...
And a great outpouring of raw emotion that made for a captivating read ~& enthralled throughout...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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its a dark and beautiful poem, great work!
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nice work, those feeling of mistrust take a long time to get over, you will always guestion his feelings. Be wary and don't let your guard down. thanks for sharing and keep writing.
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Great poem hun I hope you are able to get through those feelings you have been going through. It takes time. <3
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Sad but Heratfelt
To me this write is very sad because once you are sacarred emotionally and the trust issues become just that an issue it will foreve rbe in the back of your head can I ever trust the one I love depely and whole heartedly ect. this write is heartfelt because you wanted yearned and needed that loving feeling badly and as you said left everything to gain it and given him your all and well happy for you that he is back and I will always pray and continue to do that always for you because yu deserve that happiness and warmth any ways a sweetly penned heart felt deep poem from ya. keep up the good work and hope life continues to treat you well because you deserve it
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