The sun coming up,
A wondrous sight,
Witnessed by few,
Treasured by less.
I lay here this morning,
My head on your chest,
The sun is rising,
You hold me tight.
We gaze at the splendor,
This world is unfolding.
My day will begin with you by my side.
A contest entry
- One night with you by Angelo di Luce.
480 points, ended April 16, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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now this i really like this is reall a great little piece. it is sometimes the greatest thoughts that come from the simplest replies
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Beautiful simplicity! It tells of love unfolding from the night to day. Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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Cleverly done, you almost fooled me for a minute
Thank you, well done
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