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Longing

every morning

 the coffee is fixed


 each afternoon

     I pace and wait


at night

I think of yesterday


in those moments of longing
I feel you


  (and we finally embrace)

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Prompt: eye spy

In a list

A contest entry

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    April 4
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    This is beautiful, you capture what we all what to spy that's for sure. Best to you in the contest


  • Mirthryl
    April 3

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    The mind's eye is a powerful conjurer, especially when we can 'see' so clearly what we most ardently wish for!


  • maralisa silver member
    April 3
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    aw a wonderful write so deep and powerful good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 3
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    Awww

    *Raises my cup to ya*

    This was a great poem.