Floating out into the sea
A little bottle with a message inside
With the cute little cork on top
Sealing the secret from being washed away
Wishing and washing around the waves
Floating both high and low
Seeing the world under its glassed eye
Wondering when its message will finally be read
It goes through the nights and days
bobbing little ways here and there
And finally washing ashore
Between the toes of your feet
What lies in the bottle who knows
But to you it's only for you
Pop it open and see what it says
For this is what the message reads:
"I love you"
Because I do
Author notes
I'm probably not done with this and might possibly revisit it to polish it up. Comments appreciated! 
Thanks for checking it out! ^^/
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I love you.... Cece says that over my shoulder..and shes says that she will call you around 10ish if she doesn't fall asleepish...
I really like it. I can actually picture it in my mind which is a good thing. -
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Thanks ^^ It's always nice knowing out there that there's someone to love and love back And I'll be looking forward to your pieces. I've been rather lazy in my writing department xP
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AWWWWWWWWW! CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE IT!
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awww I love you too <3
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