Making Love is pure because its AGAPE!
[It's all God's idea]
(A SOLOMON EXPRESSED WRITING)
You turn me on with a kind of look in your
Big brown eyes that make me grin
Your smooth rugged hands wandering impatiently about my skin
Gently I trace threw your crown like hair
Proceeding down into your forest beard
Ooh! Do you turn me on
Kissing hard with trembling lips
To restrain from biting your fingertips
As I embrace the warmth of your masculine hips
Ooh! Do you turn me!
Slowly drawn by your warm embrace
It’s my slippery tongue you chase
Through melodies created
Comes a passionate sweep
My heart nearly failed by
Your gentle nibbling
On my cheek
Boy! You turn me on
And by the end
There in the horizon
Appears a morning dew
I turned and whisper
How much I Love You
Yet to our amazement
Enters the crack of dawn
In the midst of our yearning
Sets a spectacular morning
And there was I
Draped in his arms
Lies that beautiful Man
Who Turns Me On
A contest entry
- .:TURN ME ON (make me blush):.(get some points) by Minstrel-Morose.
550 points, ended April 4, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SEXUAL HEALING ^_^ by gigglesalot.
700 points, ended May 2, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Passionate and ready for love. Well written. Blessings.
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Absolutely cool
I admire that you can talk of just basic elemental love in poetry. You have a talent for putting those universal feelings into words. Good luck to you. Keep writing
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Your passionate penning for the one in your life that means so much is sentimentally shared with us...Innocently scribed with love...keep penning...
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Reason your poem wasn't put in the finals:This was a very good poem but I was looking for something a little more blunt and X rated. Good job though
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ha ha ha ha no comments till i judge nut good job
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YOUR ALRIGHT WITH ME KEEP LOOKING AHEAD. *Tee Hee* nite nite
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