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[Spring cloudburst] Haiku

Spring cloudburst -

drawing out grassy greens

and sidewalk worms


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  • Samplette gold member
    April 4

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    AH, yes. This is a lovely haiku. Love the presentation. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam