Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Remembered

I texted you today
asked if you were at school,
because I forgot my homework....
(I can be such the fool)

I was going to ask you to get it,
from my locker in A-Hall
but then I remembered,
I didn't need you to get it at all....

I had put it in my bag,
I abruptly became aware,
but I had already texted you,
and you were still there....

so I was going to ask you
to leave a note for me,
something to make me smile,
somewhere where I would see....

In my locker,
in A-Hall,
but then I remembered,
I Needn't ask for a note at all....

Because then I remembered,
I'm no longer one of your best friends,
so why would you do such a thing for me?
.... not one of your best friends....

Please tell me what you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)