Sending mixed signals from this clouded mind.
Unable to tell if you're getting the messages.
Am I sending false information?
Or maybe your cipher is off.
I can see in your eyes you've got much to ask,
And if you stare me down you'll know I've got some answers.
Is this really worth the risk?
Always and forever is the only thing I'll ever say.
Decipher this mass of chaos running through my head,
Decode my every thought to you.
Set free the missing information
To find the answers that you seek.
I thought I knew you so well,
But I'm just an utter fool.
But there's no turning back now,
We're way too far gone.
I saw something in you, the man you wish to be.
There's so much of yourself standing in the way.
We got here together and I refuse to leave alone...
Even if if kills us, we'll get this right.
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for Contest: Decode by Paramore
this turned out pretty well I think. i was able to plunk one out.
A contest entry
- Open to many different things.... by LaVieBohemme.
925 points, ended April 18, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
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wow you did great on this poem. you did good at putting emotion into this poem. my favorite line would be "We got here together and I refuse to leave alone..."
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congrats on the trophy
it is well deserved you express yourself very well. I love this line:
I saw something in you, the man you wish to be.
There's so much of yourself standing in the way.
Isnt that the truth, that is the truth. Some men can't even get over themselves, but we see the potential but it doesn't work until they see it too. You can try to show them but they still can't see...I love this write it is awesome, keep it up!
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thank you very much for your comment. glad you enjoyed my poem ^^
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so good
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wow. This is great! Goes along with the song exceptionally (hope I spelled that right ) Good job and best of luck in this contest!
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