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Etched Glass

Missing image
frozen in time
dawns frost flowers
on window pane

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http://wild-magic-girl.deviantart.com/art/frosted-world-109912411

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  • Linrose
    April 13
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    CONGRATS!!

    Congratulations, BluesMan, on winning BRONZE! Very lovely haiku!


    Linda


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 4

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    This is a powerful image to bring the sketch of the scenario..love it and many thanks for sharing it...well done indeed...


  • bridgetjanejone
    April 3
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    This is good. I don't like the photo prompt though! It distracts - the reader should be able to get it on their own. I feel a little cheated! Also haiku shouldn't have a title which gives away the 'aha' moment. The title should just be the first line. Although, if you changed the third line to the title it would be outstanding!! Can you see that?