on the garden bench
a robin sits
worm watching
Andrew Hide
03~03~2004
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Written March 3rd, 2004
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A robin sits
worm watches
a garden bench
You do have great haikus!
Mari
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This is cute for some reason in my opinion. I can't give in more than that right now in my comments and certainly cannot come up with a haiku of my own at the moment but it is a great write. Great job.
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Myra, that is wonderful, the first draft of this piece was indeed,
on a bench
a robin sits
human-watching
Andrew -
... or better still:
on the garden bench
a robin sits
Eve watching
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Lovely!
Lovely, dearest Andrew! Simply a smile stringing poem - see: ---------->
I just love the "new" Andrew. So carefree these writes.
May I add my version, too, as these reader-poets did?
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on the garden bench
a robin sits
man watching
Myra
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Nicely done Haiku.How long dtd the worm watch?
Early Robin
Gets the worm,late Robin
Much luckier.
Bill. -
You have such a brilliant example of haiku here AND it is very cute great job Jacqui
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Excellent!
Great true haiku, thankyou. -
once there was a worm
robin satisfied and replete
grinning on a bench
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a worm sits
in the dirt
bird watching
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worm fledding its next victim
burrying fast!.....
very cute
spring does that to us, heh?
Tamara
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