Sharp like the edge
Of a samurai’s sword
No one can match
The mighty strength of the lord
Compassion his secret
He’s easy on the eyes
An angel with devil power
He’s the ultimate prize
The speed of quick lighting
He moves like wild fire
Ticking every second
It makes your eyes tire
But no one can compare
To his boundless love
The demon angel sent
From heaven above
But she’s the little girl
Always at his side
Keeping up so easy
To match his long stride
She takes it all slow
But no one can compare
To the short ninja girl
With the long silver hair
Assassination her game
With shadows as stealth
You never saw it coming
As she drains away your health
With AshRuin on the top
She’s not far below
To surpass him by far
Is her one and only goal
But Ash is the best
Until she joins the game
Then life as he knows it
Will forever change
Author notes
This actually is a poem about a character in a game named Ashruin...the other character mentioned is named Kairanna.
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Comments
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hmm... I liked it until you said ninja which changed the poem from serious to silly.
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lol i'm sorry but the poem is about 2 game characters. one is a worrier (AshRuin) and the other is a ninja (Kairanna)
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Interesting
This is a very interesting write. Not a topic I hear much about. Your rhyming works very well and the flow is very good. Nice imagery and metaphores. Nice job and thank you for entering!
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