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Lift the Veil (Uncover)




Uncover yourself to me
let me see the beauty
underneath the veil
that you hide behind.

There is beauty to be had
deep under the exterior.
Beauty I want to touch
in tender ways.

Become my butterfly
emerging from its cocoon
spreading from my lips
the word beautiful.


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  • The Fun House silver member
    April 17

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    This is a beautiful, eloquent piece of poetry and I really enjoyed reading this wholeheartedly. Wonderfully penned.


  • geckogirl silver member
    April 2
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    all 3 stanzas cannot be faulted....

  • If i would have known you were

    going to write about me I would have done a Collab with you! you are so sweet! I know i am getting ahead of my self! you are awesome Swan ! your write are so perfect! Love this one too! I was just joking earlier!

    Blessings

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