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When Sauce Met Meat

A piece of meat
left in the oven too long
sizzles and spits its fury
as the bottle of sauce
gasps at its rude awakening
and slowly pulls back in objection
as it is tilted towards
the furious overheated feast.
Both furrow their brows
with displeasure
and are unsatisfied
by the effects of the other
on each of their tastes.

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  • condor gold member
    July 12

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    This is geogous and really akes me hungry. Now i have to go and cook a couple of lamb chops and drown them in sauce. You certainly know how to show images in your words and to give these objects characters of their own. Very well done.