I want somebody I can talk to
Tell all my secrets to
Be myself with
Someone to be my crying shoulder
To hold and every blue moon hold me
I want my degree in Psychology
So I can tell my friends there crazy
And actually prove it
Maybe even get my masters
To help people with there problems
I want more than a one night stand
More than a night of passion
Someone who will call in the morning
Some who after the fun is done
I can just hold through the night
I want someone to laugh with
Talk for hours about nothing with
To just stare into there eyes
To kiss and to hold
Someone to make me realize
I want someone who excepts me
Someone independant
Someone who will tell me when im being stupid
Yet listen to my problems without judgement
Who can take it and dish it out
A person to be real with
Someone who understands and accepts me
For me
Author notes
someone told me i didnt kno what i wanted one day so to have a lil closure i wrote this
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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GOOD SO FAR...
I find the best way to make something flow is by using a pattern in the syllables...
I want somebody I can talk to
Tell all my deepest secrets to
...it's not a big change but it helps the poem in the end...
The fourth paragraph might be better as the second... LOVE THE ENDING... DO. NOT. CHANGE. IT.

