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A Day in the Life

1.get up and instantly sad
you already know this day will be bad


2.get out of bed look down at thighs
first thing you see, the thing you most despise


3.go to school and feel alone
tempted to eat but your driven by bone


4.come home, face the mirror
open your eyes so you can see clearer


5.you already know what you'll see
big thighs, love handles, and fat ugly me

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  • FadingObsession
    November 3
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    extremely creative and well written!! great job!

  • vicki374
    June 10

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    Wow =\ I like the style of this poem, really clever and well written, thank you for letting me read it =)

    xx


  • Doom Fridge
    April 3
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    awesome