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Whale

i'm a failure,
---- a gluttonous whale
eating my feelings afraid to face the scale.
he's the thing i really want
but my insecurites have come back to haunt.
he doesnt want me, i'm not good enough
striving to be perfect is proving too tough.
if only i were prettier
i can see it in his eyes.
we have so much in common
but i'll never be his prize.
if i could be better prettier and skinny
if i was good enough charming and mini.
maybe we'd be together
if i looked more like her,
maybe he'd want me
if i wasnt so unsure.
but i'm just a failure,
----a gluttonous whale

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