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Dreaming of Heaven

                          You dream that you are
                      in this place,not on the ground
                                  but in the sky

                               
                          You dream that you are
                            in this place full of
                          warmth without any harm


                      You dream that you are in this
                              place,where theres
                          light and no darkness

                        You dream that you are in
                        this place where people
                          never hate and always
                                      love

                        So, that night,you wake
                                up and wonder
                        what you were dreaming
                              about and you
                      finally figured it out,you
                            were dreaming of
                                  Heaven
                       

Author notes

hey this is my bery first poem that i worte(i just started writing them) so i hope u like and plz comment on it.

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  • nice

    its a nice poem..i like it. its not anythin like poem but its nice

  • a good piece - it is good to dream of heaven, let the spiritual side shine through and then to wake and realise the message of a dream, is all good.