my virginity
was never important to me
I’d been fucked by life
so many times
I couldn’t even remember
where
when or
how it had happened
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wow
sensuous carefree to the point of being maddeningly inviting -
A different take on virginity. Life can make us jaded and cold. Well done at painting that in words and giving us a glimpse of your take on it.
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Oh I can relate to that one. Just like, 'It didn't matter when I lost my virginity; the world already fucked me so many times, there wasn't really a lost time at all'. Nicely wrote!
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Awesome ! This is so powerful and the picture really fits. I love the ending, the way you set it up and formatted it. Is this what I keep hearing called "dirty pretty?" if so, I like it.
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another one... you do a great job with brevity. glad i added you. thanks for the read.
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a very cool write.
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That's pretty deep.
That could possibly be what that chick is thinking.
I loved the whole picture + poem thing because it fit together extremely well.
Great job.
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