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Tha One

You said that I was yours and you were mine
That you would love me until the end of time
You cried, I cried, you laughed, I laughed
I just wish that I was tha one

Tha tears that I cry are bitter and warm
They flow with life but take no form
I'm tha one who cries tha most
All you do now is sit back a boast
I tell you that I love you, I tell you that i care
But all you do is give me that blank stare
What do I do? What do i say? That will make you stay
I quit trying to please you right
I quit trying to make you feel good at night
I'm tha one who is in pain
I'm tired of being the only one

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