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Unlucky

Her back was to him
She didn’t see
The demon shining through slited eyes.
The next she felt
His fingers curled
Snapped her neck
A broken bone, a broken life.

The next girl
Unlucky she was
To know all hate
The demon had
Unlucky she was
To live along

The daughter
The worst to know
How low he’ll sink
To appease the craving.

She stopped him fast
She stopped him hard
He screamed his rage
Fire consumed
Not mortal flesh left

Unlucky he was
Living nightmare
End all time.

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