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Time's stolid air descending

Life's upward breeze, lost.

Time's stolid air
descending.

Let down.



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Blue poem for a Blue balloon. Googles images prompt. 10 words only

A contest entry

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  • Thor-201
    April 5
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    I looked at this contest, and hadn't an idea. Yours is terrific. Well done.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 3
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    creatively expressed... x


  • Nature Song silver member
    April 2

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    Let down and breathe what was and what can be! Wow...Glad you took a break from writing my friend, nice new poems. Impressive write for sure. ~Sie