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\Darkened Room/

Eyes closing, lights fade
Thoughts drift off to silence
Movement slowed.
A motionless body lies on a bed
In a room filled with darkness
Off in their own world they lay
Unprotected and weak
With no one around
Peaceful and away from their daily pains
Alone on their bed they lay
Asleep.

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