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Ode to an Ex

So You think we should all conform to your ways?

You think I should be just like you?

Fuck
      You
Fool

What was it you called me..
An Outcast..A Reject..
I'd rather be that than..

A
L E M M I N G

Following your crowd

G
O
I
N
G

[nowhere]

Fuck..I'm going where I want
when I get there
it might be

[nowhere]
B
U
T

I'm there 'cause I wanna' be

So be a sheep

Follow Your Flock

You point and Laugh
You think I care.
Sorry to disappoint you

{I DO-NT}

Your Opinion is
the NUMBER ONE entry
in my
Things
I
Don't
Give
a
Shit
About
Notebook

Ok! So..

Just
Fuck
Off



I don't need you
or
Your Shit

I'm not one bit sorry I couldn't be what You wanted
'cause
{Honestly}

Who The Hell
Would Wanna' be
a
Fucktard
like You?

See..
I Am Me
That's All I Can Ever Be

Author notes

ok so yea...ex~boyfriend long story...

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  • OurxBeginning
    April 26

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    Lmao, this is very funny. I love the word fucktard, hehe. Made me smile Bravo to you, and that's good you stand up for yourself. Well done, again.

  • MxA
    April 26

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    WOW

    A definate good message for an asswipe that couldn't treat you right, I enjoyed the format and the feeling behind every word is powerful, hope all works out for you, thanks for sharing this.

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    April 23

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    Like this message, perhaps not just to one individual male?

    Great creative word pattern, in a very special form liked it a lot.

    I only ever accept swearing when it actually increases understanding of either attitude or inner most feelings, here it is accepted with delight.

    Will have to show both my age and ignorance what is "fucktard".

    great poem, with a clear "Danger be aware" message to all arrogant males.





    • ToXiC-AnGeL gold member
      April 23
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      Definition from Urban Dictionary

      Fucktard :

      noun,
      A person of unbelieveable, inexcuseable and indescribable stupidity. (Stupidity being defined as "knowing how and doing it wrong anyway")

      NOT A CONTRACTION FOR "FUCKING RETARD"! Those who are truly "Retarded" are not responsible for their affliction. True Fucktards are 100% responsible for their situation and provide vast entertainment as they are usually blissfully unaware of their own Fucktardery.

      Most politicians for example.
      One who would actually piss on a live transformer.

      One who would use a live .22 round for a fuse in their pickup truck "just cuz it fits" and then complain about it shooting them in the nuts.

      He shot himself in the nuts? Geez, what a fucktard!

      • SimplySonnets gold member
        April 24
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        WOW! really lied this definition, but why give politicians such an affliction, I think all they are is quiet simply "bent" and are very aware of it.


        • ToXiC-AnGeL gold member
          April 26
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          aha

          I did wonder..

          In my opinion Politicians are just little-people turned power-people ~ meaning with the power to screw over little people and they know it...so they use it.
          ~
          I mean if I had power ...I'd take over the world too LOL


  • T.o.r.t.u.r.e. gold member
    April 20

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    I LO VE THE STRUCTURE.. the formatting is awesoem i love when it says "fuck you fool" thats great thanks for entering and good luck in the contest


  • My Last Breath.x
    April 15

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    Whoa. This is awesome. LOL, I wish I had the guts to say this the many times my ex's broke up with me lol.

    Great rebellion. 'specially the part about the 'not giving a shit notebook' LOL, that cracked me up.


  • Fibe Kill-DFW Punk-
    April 3

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    nice, i like this cause it wasnt like the ussuall shitty break up poems those ones are always like boohoo emo ass fuck shit, all over dramatic, this one was awesome though, thanks for entering and keep writting


  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    April 2

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    this is awesome, like really! i could say that about my ex-girlfriend. omg, i'm breathless!

    kAsSiE


  • XOxYuKkIxOx
    April 2

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    I certaintly agree with you. Ex's are asses.....all the words i was thinkin you put on paper. I loved the raw emotion. GREAT WORK!!!!


  • Tear-Stained Heart
    April 2
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    thank you. you took the words out of my mout


  • CrystalLizard
    April 2

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    I had an ex I would have liked to share this with. Your long dangling poem made me think of something else as well.... Male ego.... I love the "things I don't give a shit about notebook." LOL!! Very powerful write, and the ending is terrific. Best of luck in the contest.


  • StarEyes
    April 2

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    Powerful write! I wish I would have thought about writing something like this to my ex. I love this!! You did a great job on this one!

    Best of luck in this contest!


  • LadyTzimisce
    April 2
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    I have a friend like that I wish i could have written him something similar. Nice Write

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