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Kickshaw

A kickshaw.

The fair thought of how one should live.

Undulant sermon and blanks shot from the sceptor,
Crudely serviced by Philosophy 101.

So many brake at the notion that believing there's nothing
Is different than faith in myself and in life.

I feel worthy and I feel free.

A good deed done to avoid punishment ,
Running rampant in the streets.

Is nothing compared to us magnanimous fools.

Untethered by musty, old dither...
Sit down and dust it off!!

Kick-start the heart, and
See what you truly see.



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  • lunarlunacy
    April 5

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    "Is nothing compared to us magnanimous fools."
    - t'would be a futile counterweight would it not. LOL

    what a great read to start this sunday off on. look forward to reading more of your works.


  • aboomer silver member
    April 4

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    I like your wording in this - great depth, images - and wisdom, especially in the last 2 lines.
    nicely done

    thank you for your entry
    best wishes


  • estbelle gold member
    April 2
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    I love the message of the ending lines and S4 is one of my fave part of the piece

    belle


  • individuality gold member
    April 2

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    aye, the heart will spin one dizzy, faith, it's a toss of a coin these days i think, the whole world either crazy with it or crazy without it - a good poem.