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antique child





The laughter in my garden ~

still stirs...

I'll give my breath back
to the wind.

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  • jackreed3 gold member
    April 17
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    That poem sounds like the beauty of youllll
    JackReed3


  • LadyJane13
    April 17
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    sadness

    is evident at a childhood lost.Lovely write!

    Jane


  • Rose Angel gold member
    April 2
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    Oops...missed this..


  • Rose Angel gold member
    April 2
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    Intriguing quite delightful write!


  • Meroza
    April 2
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    Very deep, well penned

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