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The Devill

 

 

There once was a time,

Here in the realm of -

Earth that I was born.

 

Dancing with the wolfs

Every full moon I do,

Vampires drawns to my

Ice cold wolfish eyes.

Labeld as a weirdo,

Leader of the pack.

 

 

Author notes

Everyone always mistake my last name with the "devil", and often it turns a bit funny for people gets scared by a simple name.

 

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  • maralisa silver member
    June 19
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    a wonderful background and poem good luck inthe contestmaralisa

  • Well done Ms Devill! Oh an ain't nuthing ice cold about you!
    This background fits your poem perfectly. Very well done.

    ~Jeannie


  • nichtmich silver member
    June 7

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    Mmmmm....am I missing something? I don't see a background.....kewl poem though


    • Meroza
      June 8
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      Oh my you must have a small screen, the background is behind the white Try zoom out on the page, then you can view it.

  • I like the coloring in this as well. It reminds mw kiwi fruit. LOL... ~~Iridessa~~


  • awannabepoet
    April 24

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    Awh a story I could hold close to heart for this earth is hell and hell is earth but for all the evil there is on this earth there is will be those that surge forth and take the lead and in this poem I did find such a soul.

    I like it, I like it so!


  • Venugopal gold member
    April 14
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    nice poem, very sweet


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    April 9
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    Very interesting, I like it<3 Good work

  • lol i thought the same think at first glance so what does it say and what does it mean?besides all that it was a cool piece


  • trekkergirl
    April 3

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    very creative. I can see why they would mistake the word for devill if they weren't paying much attention. Thanks for sharing this write with us.

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