Just a girl,
lacking confidence,
in a alien country.
Steps to womanhood,
changed me..
forever..
Author notes
fifteen words on adulthood and growing up.
A contest entry
- 10/15 Adulthood and growing up (QUICKY) by Meroza.
700 points, ended April 2, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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short and to the point
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wow, this is amazing, you said so much in these 15 words, the whole journey from childhood to adulthood captured, brilliant piece
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wow
I'm kinda speachless...
such a small poem, but such power and so well written! you've expressed so much with this over a very short piece.. Its amazing!
(:
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in a alien country.
love this line..says a lot!
Congrats on gold!
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Bravo sis!! This is an amazing short poem and I'm so happy to see that you won a golden cup with it. Congratulations!!!
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Your style inspires me
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Awesome, Sis...
So much expressed so beautifully & with a staggering emotional depth in so few words...
Impressive as always!!!
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Gorgeously done sis.
Your words here carry
so much depth and emotion..
and the ending was so powerful.
Just amazing!
Congrats on the very well-deserved gold too! -
Cong on the GOLD.. Well deserved.
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Congratulations on the golden chalice!!
I love it!! 
Peace, xx Cyn xx 
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brilliant hun, short but as always you manage to say so much. congrats on the gold. x
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Congrats on the gold!!
Short yet perfectly formed, this says it all with brevity and style hunni as the golden nugget proves. Well done sis keep 'em coming
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loved it, deserved 2 win. great writing, short yet sweet. a great write, loved reading it. so amazing, i cant rele say much else!
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What a great read this one is! I love it!! You said alot with so few words! Great job!
Congrats on the Gold!!
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Lovely
Congrats on the gold.
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Wonderful words that speak from the heart and worthy of the gold that it got.
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This really is good, I like how you put this all together!
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Thank you
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a wonderful poem sis I can so relate to this good luck in the contestmaralisa
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It's quite an experience to grow up in a foreign country. Wonderful thought for this prompt my friend and good luck to you! Thanks a lot for your thoughts on mine!
Jeremy0826
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