I was a loner as a child I just wanted friends
I wasn't wild and i didn't fix mends.
The marks were questioned i said i fell
But i knew everyone could tell.
Inside I buried the tears
Inside lay my deepest darkest fears.
I constantly count the circles around my eyes
All the abuse all in a tie.
There's no holding back the tears i cry
All the abuse I'm going to die.
I hear you yell my name in the night
I cry cause soon ill have to fight.
When hes finished having fun
I'm SO glad its all done!!!
A contest entry
- PAINFUL MEMORY!!! by Jazzlyn.
575 points, ended April 2, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
ok not my best write and its my first time entering a contest so sorry if its not right
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i am so sorry that you went through all this turmoil. no one should ever be abused in any form by anyone. there's no reason for it. i hope that who ever this person is that abused you has gotten some help and that you are ok. i totally agree with what Acronym said in his last line, "what doesn't kill you makes you stronger".
i know it's gonna sound weird but there's one quote from a disney cartoon that makes sense. "keep moving forward". continue on with life and not go back into the past so much. we can't change the past, we can only learn from it. i really hope that the abuser has learned from the mistakes that are here in this piece. if not, i pray that this person will find help soon. keep on writing! -
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I know how you feel..I almost went through the same thing..Its definitely aggrivating not having friends and just being a loner..I was never really popular but thats all just an illusion as I've learned.. And really being popular is overrated, way too much in fact. So its a whole lot easier to be yourself. and it is hard letting down your wall and stepping out of your comfort zone but do it at your own pace and open up..and yes there is always that possibility that you'll get hurt and its not always easy but get back up and dust yourself off and try again, its all about learning and what doesnt kill you makes you stronger
Lovely write! Keep it coming!
-Acronym
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Very deeply moving *hugs*.
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HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!! i told u once im tellin u twice this shit iz f***ing deep. Nice Job!
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that poem is ganster.
your mexican juggalette
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i lik it
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good job. The emotion in this is very powerul! Mcl and keep it wicked!!
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Ohhhhhh, one can feel the pain in this one. What a wonderful job you did on this one. You did a great job on this one! I am soooo sorry this happened to you.
Best of luck in this contest.
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It was great really good
and lots of pain
good luck in the contest
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